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IELTS SPEAKING(주제에 대해 이야기하기)

by 언올차 2023. 5. 12.

아이엘츠 스피킹/ 아이엘츠 연습/ 아이엘츠/ IELTS / 영어공부/ 꾸준히 하루씩/ 이전자료 연습하기, 복습하기/ 오늘도 한번 더/ 아이엘츠스피킹/ SPEAKING

 

이번에는 스피킹 첫번째 자료입니다. 제가 기존에 연습했던 것이고, 물론 문법 실수가 있고, 고쳤음에도 몇몇 이해가 되지 않는 문장들이 있을 수 있습니다. 가감 없이 최대한 실수의 부분을 색으로 표시할 예정입니다.

 

Q : Technology has taken over so many aspects of our lives that many older people, who are often suspicious of technology such as the internet, are missing out on the advantages of the modern world.

 

think about (optional)

- information

- communication

- choice

 

Question: How far do you agree or disagree?

 Use examples and evidence to support your opinion.

 

A: I definitely agree with the statement. My reasons for this are twofold.First, older people have more commonly received information from newspapers or letters. Although the technology was improving more and more, (1) older people didn’t feel any problems. However, the gap has been difficult to reduce and recover. Therefore, older people can feel difficulty in their lives and have been separated from the information sources of information . For instance, in the article the article mentioned, older people didn't know how to call a taxi through the an app, and how to order from the machines in the restaurants.

 

(1) Older people didn’t feel any problems. However, the gap has been difficult to reduce and recover.

  • It didn't impact older people too much. However, the gap has become much harder to bridge.

 

 

Secondly, I believe that older people want to learn how to use the Internet. But they don’t know where they go, (2) and how they study. (3) Because this information also showed only the internet.

 

(2)  and how they study.

  • to find out this information.

(3) Because this information also showed only the internet.

  • Because the source of this information is on the internet. Therefore, there is a technological barrier for older people to become more educated about the internet.

 

끝.

 

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