IELTS WRITING (2)

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-. Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

[Answer]

There have a lot of products in the market. Many companies have competed to sell their items to some customers. To introduce their goods is used advertising. There have two insights advertising is a good way and it is not necessary. This mentioned two parts and their reason.

 

Overall, I think it is a positive way which connects with customers and products. And it is also able to plant the mind to want to give it. Otherwise, companies don’t introduce their goods, it hasn’t happened works like selling and buying.

 

Some people are able to argue that the advertising is not necessary. Because people used to buy some items the reason it is not a requirement but want it to gain. For example, when people choose their new smartphone, they were not interested in the phone’s ability and cost. They consider only their mind. In addition, it is limited to the parts of the advertising. A few years ago, people used to move out places and read several things like magazines, books and newspapers. But as soon as the pandemic it took off rapidly reducing. As a result, the way that introduces the products no longer attracts people.

 

However, it is impacted peoples’ minds. Other people want to compare kinds of products which are different manufacturing or others. Although it is too hard, they want it. And if companies didn’t explain their products. The customers couldn’t figure out it. Moreover, advertising is not only one meaning which sells products but also announces the company name. For example, Samsung which is the biggest company in South Korea tries to advertise its products such as phones, TV and other electronic devices in the world market. In other countries, people didn’t wonder about Samsung and their goods. But people are able to be familiar with the company name as spending time more and more. After that, it would be able to interest about company’s goods. I think it is a result of advertising.

 

In conclusion, there mentioned two opinions as necessary advertising to help sell the items and reserve opinion. Some people didn’t interest in the company and only concentrate their minds on reserved thoughts. However, advertising is necessary to announce the name of the company and introduce the products. And it is able to help to sell goods.