diary_June 5th.

다이어리에 최대한 영어 표현을 많이 쓰려고 노력하였습니다. 하지만 틀린 부분, 틀린 문법이 들어가는 것은 아직 미숙하여 발생되는 것 같습니다. 앞으로도 문장을 만들면서 말이 되는지에 집중하고 자 합니다.

 

(1) A few days ago, I went to the pub with my classmates. I looked forward to meeting them. because we had a vacation so didn't have any class for 5 days. I was glad to meet them and I was enjoying and talking to a classmate about another called Jain. I have several happening for the vacation. I said I couldn't wait to meet you. when I went to a famous place in London, I passed by Jain there, and I figure out she met some man. and I could guess the man might be her boyfriend. but it was a bit wrong. and then, as far as I know, the man was her brother, not her boyfriend.

며칠 전, 나는 급우들과 술집에 갔다. 나는 그들을 만나기를 고대했다. 방학이라 5일동안 수업이 없었거든요. 나는 그들을 만나서 반가웠고 같은 반 친구와 Jain이라는 다른 사람에 대해 이야기를 나누며 즐거워했습니다. 나는 휴가를 위해 몇 가지 일이 있습니다. 나는 당신을 만나기를 기다릴 수 없다고 말했다. 런던의 유명한 장소에 갔을 때 그곳에서 Jain을 지나쳤고 그녀가 어떤 남자를 만났다는 것을 알았습니다. 그리고 나는 그 남자가 그녀의 남자 친구일지도 모른다고 추측할 수 있었다. 하지만 조금 틀렸습니다. 그리고 내가 아는 한 그 남자는 그녀의 남자 친구가 아니라 그녀의 오빠였습니다.

[수정본] A few days ago, I went to the pub with my classmates. I was looking forward to seeing them because we had a vacation and didn't have any classes for 5 days. I was delighted to meet them and had a great time chatting with a classmate about our friend Jain. We shared stories about what we did during the vacation. I said, "I can't wait to see you all." While I was visiting a famous place in London, I happened to see Jain there, and I noticed that she was with a man. I assumed he might be her boyfriend, but it turned out I was slightly mistaken. As far as I know, that man was actually her brother, not her boyfriend.

 

(2) In the midst of the excitement, however, occurred a problem. Jack who is my classmate lost his bag in the pub. I could only say to him, It's too bad but if there's anything, I can do. He looked so sad as the reason that he put his passport in his bag. therefore, he had to be able to find his language and couldn't stop thinking about his worst future. Most of his classmates were as sad as he was I would be thought.

그런데 그 와중에 문제가 생겼다. 같은 반 친구인 Jack이 술집에서 가방을 잃어버렸어요. 안타깝지만 할 수 있는 일이 있다면. 여권을 가방에 넣은 이유만큼 슬픈 표정이었다. 따라서 그는 자신의 언어를 찾을 수 있어야 했고 자신의 최악의 미래에 대한 생각을 멈출 수 없었습니다. 그의 동급생 대부분은 내가 생각하는 것처럼 슬펐습니다.

[수정본] In the midst of the excitement, however, a problem arose. My classmate, Jack, had lost his bag in the pub. All I could say to him was, "That's really unfortunate, but if there's anything I can do to help, let me know." He appeared deeply saddened, especially because he had kept his passport inside the bag. The thought of potentially losing his identification and the implications it could have for his future weighed heavily on his mind. I could sense that many of our classmates shared his sadness and concerns.

 

(3) Yesterday, I heard about his situation. It was positive words that he had found a solution by waiting time until the government office opened. And he could make his emergency passport. I realized it was too hard to look for the stealing bad.

어제 그의 상황에 대해 들었습니다. 관공서가 열릴 때까지 시간을 기다리며 해법을 찾았다는 긍정적인 말이었다. 그리고 그는 비상 여권을 만들 수 있었습니다. 나는 도둑질 나쁜 사람을 찾는 것이 너무 어렵다는 것을 깨달았습니다.

[수정본] Yesterday, I received an update on his situation. Thankfully, there was some positive news. Jack managed to find a solution by patiently waiting until the government office opened. He was able to obtain an emergency passport. This incident made me realize how difficult it can be to recover a stolen bag.

 

각각의 단락별로 해석과, 재 작성한 문장으로 구성하였습니다. 몇몇 문장은 전체를 패러다이징하여 표현하였습니다.